Ah...people who need to sound smart.
Can't live with 'em...pass the donuts.
Hold on a sec. Lemme take you on a quick trip back in time.
A few years back, I was Product Marketing Guy for a rocketship of a tech company.
It was incredible how quickly the company was growing. Unfortunately, it had nothing to do with anything resembling a customer focus.
To anyone paying attention, it was clear what had to be done:
Make 2016 the Year of the Customer!!
So, we're at Sales kickoff, and it's made known that 2016 will indeed be the Year of the Customer!
The senior vice president of Sales gets up on stage to welcome everyone.
It's obvious he's about to set the tone for the meeting...and the year ahead.
"Welcome to Sales Kickoff," he says.
"This is the year we will reassert the primacy of customer focus across all aspects of our duties."
Wait. What??
Clear, compelling, convincing messages start with another C.
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When you're concise, you almost have to be simple, too.
And simple is a GOOD thing.
ย ย ย People get simple.
ย ย ย ย ย People want to act on simple.
So here are three quick tips so you can reassert the primacy of simplicity on your messaging.
(That means, follow these tips and you'll be more clear and concise.)
๐ญ.) ๐ฅ๐ฒ๐บ๐ผ๐๐ฒ ๐ฒ๐ ๐๐ฟ๐ฎ ๐๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฑ๐.
"This is the year we will reassert the primacy of customer focus across all aspects of our duties."
Could become:
"This year we will reassert customer focus across our duties."
Not great yet, but still way better...and all we did was remove eight words.
๐ฎ.) ๐จ๐๐ฒ ๐๐ถ๐บ๐ฝ๐น๐ฒ ๐น๐ฎ๐ป๐ด๐๐ฎ๐ด๐ฒ.
When you pretend you're speaking with a 5th grader, your messaging becomes easier to understand.
"This year we will reassert customer focus across our duties."
becomes:
"This year, we'll become more focused on our customers in everything we do."
Yes...added back three words, but it's WAY easier to understand, right?
NOW that we're concise, let's expand on it a bit, shall we?
๐ฏ.) ๐ง๐ฎ๐ธ๐ฒ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ฝ๐ฒ๐ฟ๐๐ฝ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐๐ถ๐๐ฒ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐๐ผ๐๐ฟ ๐ฎ๐๐ฑ๐ถ๐ฒ๐ป๐ฐ๐ฒ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฑ ๐ฎ๐ด๐ฎ๐ถ๐ป, ๐ธ๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ฝ๐ถ๐ป๐ด ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ฎ๐ฏ๐ผ๐๐ฒ ๐๐ถ๐ฝ๐ ๐ถ๐ป ๐บ๐ถ๐ป๐ฑ.
If we are speaking to sales pros,
"This year, we'll become more focused on our customers in everything we do."
becomes:
"What are we without our customers?
This year, let's become MORE focused on the customer in everything we do.ย
Your customers...and your commissions will feel it!!"
Can you picture how the room would have erupted if the Sales leader said that?
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